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Okay, it was alright for me. and this definit e ly didn't feel right ahm... do we always need mirrors to describe the main character's appearance? hehe... Interesting.Interesting.

For me,all throughout the story I am confused if Riley is a girl or a boy. The name suggest a male character right? But I also think and I need ...

My first review of the day ! [I will not review this grammar wise. You're better than I am. :) ] The night King... yes,for me it was too long ...

Interesting story ! I wanted to read the next chapter. Many questions were left in my mind. Like what does the 2 child look like? The new country? Oh ! ...

The girl left her home right? but from who? sorry but I cant figure it out. I liked this poem, I am just confused "who is she running away from?" ...

I have noticed your use of then as than... but anyway a good short story :) You have shown the different sides of the writer to every person she writes. ...

And you hate it, you hate being responsible for other people. But you do it anyway, you do everything with a smile on your face and you never let any ...

MY FAVORITE SOOOO FAR ! My first time to read romance here at YWS and I really loved it... I can feel the longing of the speaker, ! It's so ...

A a quartet ? Im I right? I felt your pain. It is night time here and it is a nice poem to read now. I cant go to sleep ...

It was very GOOD ! I just have read only 1/4 of it but I already loved it. My eyes were hurting so I have to stop reading on the ...

Well uhm the first part before the part which has a date in it is interesting, strong and Solid... Thats just for me, I didnt finish it though. She began ...

Content wise, it was pretty good. I am nervous all through out the story.. I have noticed this I was cut off by the sounds of heaving breathing and what ...

I liked this one. I am not going to review technically since I am a newbie. I felt the emotions you want to imply. I just wonder why does the ...

This is the first essay I have encountered here. I'm laughin with all the comments haha, Im sorry with that. Anyway, as many other say, some words which is totally ...

Wow... it is the first one I read here on The Young Writers Society. And I love this one. I am reading alone in my room and I felt my ...