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Thank you for all of your great feedback! You going in depth really helps! Thanks so much!!

Interesting perspective. Honestly, I haven't quite figured out what the story means to me either! I myself have multiple theories! Thanks Questio for reviewing!

Thanks so much for the feedback! It really helps! Yes, this is a first draft definitely. A lot of times I write stories and I don't know how to improve ...

Thank you so much! I don't think I would have noticed some of these little nit-picks, even during reading this over! Thank you for taking the time to read and ...

I agree with much of what you said. Reading this over six months later, I could not believe I'd actually written it! Thank you so much for the feedback, I ...

Thank you Questio for your time to write the review! I get what you mean with the "they shrieked" thing, I hadn't edited this story yet so I didn't correct ...

Wow! I really, really like this poem. I think you've done a fantastic job with word choice, and I think your message really does ring true in many people. The ...

Thank you ChocolateCello for your suggestions! I will definitely take them into account. I appreciate all of the feedback!

Thank you, so, so much. I never expected this to be received so well. All I can say is thank you, thank you, thank you.

Wow. Thank you so much. I did not expect such amazing responses! This was only the first draft, I assumed their would be so many corrections. About the "answering questions ...

Wow. Thank you so much. I did not expect such amazing responses! This was only the first draft, I assumed their would be so many corrections. About the "answering questions ...

Overall, I like this story! There are some times where your voice is really coming out, and I almost feel like you are talking to me in real life, and ...