iamanaspiringwriter

Wow!! I really, really like this poem. I have to say, some of the things it the poem make me squirm, but I think that's good, because I can definitely ...

I like this poem. It is short, I think the ending is quite intriguing! For some reason, the rhythm of this poem reminds me of being light and happy, but ...

I think the story is great so far, it has much potential! I definitely like the unique plot, I can really picture the town in my mind! However, I do ...

I do like the poem, however there are a few minor errors, such as "and when the squirrels burry the nuts with greed" It is actually bury. Also, "All the ...

I think this first chapter definitely makes me want to read more, although I do suggest taking a look at your punctuation, as with most things. I feel the story ...

Overall, I like this story! There are some times where your voice is really coming out, and I almost feel like you are talking to me in real life, and ...