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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 5

    I've been dormant for a few weeks! This is my first review in awhile! Anyway, I read over the chapter and I thought some parts of it were funny! Especially ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Young Guardians

    Hello and happy review day! I know this review might be kind of random, but I was digging through the short story section, and here I am! Putting Young Writet's ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10

    I'm really sorry that I'm reviewing the tenth chapter without any prior knowledge! I guess it's better than nothing! Oh and by the way, happy review day! After reading through ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Slit ch 7

    Hello and happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I liked this chapter, I apologize, as I have not read the previous chapters. I think it's just a matter of looking over ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 13: Incant

    Hello! Happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I apologize that I have no read the previous chapters, so I guess here goes nothing! First, I'd like to say that I think ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 9-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I

    Hello, and happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I have not read any of the previous chapters, so this review is solely based on this chapter! Now on with the review! ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 5:

    Hello, and happy review day! I apologize in advance, my review will not be based/mention anything about any previous chapters, as I have not read them. Overall, I thought this ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eleven

    Warning: I have not read any of the previous chapters! I apologize! Now for the review. (Oh and happy review day!) Anyway, I liked the story! This chapter was pretty ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. III

    Hello! Happy review day! I apologize in advance, I haven't read the previous chapters, however I do like the story. When you first said that the twins thought Warren was ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 3.1, The Name Game

    I haven't read the previous chapters, so I apologize in advance. Happy review day! I read through your story and the plot definitely interests me. I did not see any ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 5: (part 2)

    Hello! It's review day today, I'm sorry I have not read the previous chapters. I saw this has been in the Green Room for awhile, so I thought I would ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ludwig. (chapter 2)

    Hello Mikons3! Happy review day! I think your story is great so far, I've just got a few nit-picks I would like to point out. "Moon is full, shines bright ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Radical Kills [Chapter two: 'One Down']

    Hey KyotoMylo10! Happy review day! With this story, I noticed a few places where I thought the sentences didn't flow right. I don't think I'll mention them because I feel ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']

    Hey! Happy review day! Overall, I liked your story and I thought your detail was good as well as your personal voice. I really don't have any corrections, except this ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Terminate - 2 Part 2

    Hello! Iamanaspiringwriter here for review day! Overall, I thought your story was cool (I read the previous parts so I wouldn't be completely confused going into this). I'm guessing this ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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