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Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 5
I've been dormant for a few weeks! This is my first review in awhile! Anyway, I read over the chapter and I thought some parts of it were funny! Especially ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: The Young Guardians
Hello and happy review day! I know this review might be kind of random, but I was digging through the short story section, and here I am! Putting Young Writet's ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10
I'm really sorry that I'm reviewing the tenth chapter without any prior knowledge! I guess it's better than nothing! Oh and by the way, happy review day! After reading through ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Slit ch 7
Hello and happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I liked this chapter, I apologize, as I have not read the previous chapters. I think it's just a matter of looking over ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 13: Incant
Hello! Happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I apologize that I have no read the previous chapters, so I guess here goes nothing! First, I'd like to say that I think ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 9-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I
Hello, and happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I have not read any of the previous chapters, so this review is solely based on this chapter! Now on with the review! ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: DUET :Chapter 5:
Hello, and happy review day! I apologize in advance, my review will not be based/mention anything about any previous chapters, as I have not read them. Overall, I thought this ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eleven
Warning: I have not read any of the previous chapters! I apologize! Now for the review. (Oh and happy review day!) Anyway, I liked the story! This chapter was pretty ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. III
Hello! Happy review day! I apologize in advance, I haven't read the previous chapters, however I do like the story. When you first said that the twins thought Warren was ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 3.1, The Name Game
I haven't read the previous chapters, so I apologize in advance. Happy review day! I read through your story and the plot definitely interests me. I did not see any ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 5: (part 2)
Hello! It's review day today, I'm sorry I have not read the previous chapters. I saw this has been in the Green Room for awhile, so I thought I would ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Ludwig. (chapter 2)
Hello Mikons3! Happy review day! I think your story is great so far, I've just got a few nit-picks I would like to point out. "Moon is full, shines bright ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Radical Kills [Chapter two: 'One Down']
Hey KyotoMylo10! Happy review day! With this story, I noticed a few places where I thought the sentences didn't flow right. I don't think I'll mention them because I feel ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']
Hey! Happy review day! Overall, I liked your story and I thought your detail was good as well as your personal voice. I really don't have any corrections, except this ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Terminate - 2 Part 2
Hello! Iamanaspiringwriter here for review day! Overall, I thought your story was cool (I read the previous parts so I wouldn't be completely confused going into this). I'm guessing this ...
Sep 27, 2015
