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A bit short. Try finding out more. Check the library,encyclopedia,Computer,etc. Otherwise,It's pretty good. :D

I liked it. Also,you forgot Buffy The Vampire Slayer.She can kill Edward(Team Jacob). :) Just sayin'.

I agree with the above reviewer. Also,you are indeed very brave. I couldn't live with that,because I have Obsessive Compulsive Disorder and also Hypochondria(Fear of Bad would freak me out. ...

That was beautiful,in a way. The innocence of the world obliterated. Sad,really. As you said, " What a shame there’s no innocence left in the world..."

I know, Like I said this is a rough draft. Also.this is an OLD rough draft. My newer draft is an a pink binder. Maybe I should post the contents ...

Mmmm... I'm sitting in front of the computer,eating brownie batter..... Thay was soooo funny! Even for me,the diehard Twilight Fan. Poor Nate. edward and Bella should go to heck. Team ...

I see. I get your point. Will try to edit again. Thanks for the rewiew.

I'm soo sorry. This is my first time writing a story. I'll try to fix it. Thanks.

Oh,I love,love,loved it! Sad,though,right? But,I agree,you need to show a bit more emotion. You could be the next Stephenie Meyer,though!

You are a gifted writer. about as good as Stephenie Meyer. I wanna know what's gonna happen next! I hope I'm as good as you!

I liked it. There were a couple sentance errors,but who cares,right? I think if you apply yourself ,you could be a great writer. Keep writing stories. :P

I loved it. It seemed interesting. You have a talent for writing. :D