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Hey, thanks so much for the review! I%u2019ll try and go back over on the pronouns- I%u2019ve always wondered how to differentiate because it confuses me too, so I%u2019ll give ...

Ah cool- excited to see the two meet!

Hi, Vampricone! Thanks so much for the review- yes, it is connected to others, and you can take from that what you will :D

No worries at all :D

Hey Lim, thanks for the review! I'll definitely consider going back on pacing, and maybe the whole broken bone thing XD as a holy warrior with partial magic I guess ...

Those are great, thank you so much!

*argyll was eleven oops

Hi- yeah, good point about them not recognising each other; I figured they hadn't seen each other since they were children, but I'll revise this later :D for exact numbers, ...

Hello! Thanks so much for the review :) mega typo I've noticed because of this- I'll go back and edit it. Cheers!

Hi, Vampricone! Thanks for the review :D fixed the typo, whoops. Do you have any ideas on what else do you think i can include in future writing to explore ...

Hi Lim! Thanks so much for the review, I'll look through my work and see what i can do to improve it :D I'll definitely try to include more from ...

Thanks again, vampricone! Good point on the description; i was focusing quite a lot on characters in this extract, I'll go back over and make it make a bit more ...

Hey! Thanks so much for the review, I wasn't sure if it would get one so soon because of its length XD the advice is really useful, I've noticed that ...

thank you for the review! Yeah, that's probably a typo (will sort it out XD) and the characters are based off dnd! The idea started out as two characters me ...

Just for a bit of background, these two chapters are set some time apart: number one is about fifteen years after two, sorry I didn't include this. Enjoy :)