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Re: If I Had A Title For This It Would Be Up Here
Wow i really like it quickly write up another part i must read it!!! but just one thing if you can please... dont take it the wrong way. Just break ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Unhappy almost 15 (part 2)
Yikes its awesome, but harsh dont you think... hey dont you think it happened for a reason... look into yourself for a few moments really sit and think... were you ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Shadow: Chapter 1 part 1
im sure you hear this from many people but you are the most talented writer i have meet as concerns to novel writing. :D your writing is really and truly ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Tombstone Wings
thats creepy yet nicely put at the same time..... i cant even see something wrong with it :( :D your good at writing. I especially love the first two paragraphs. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Not an ordinary life 1
Hey, The beginning of your story is good but i think you might want to start with more of a pulling line. Something which makes the reader want to read. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Never Say Neverland Ever Again- Chapter 3
hello Noelle, Its nice though its actually not the beginning and i haven't seen the beginning yet. This reminds alot of The film that was made of Peter Pan. Its ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Heart-To-Heart
Aw that was a very nice poem. Maybe you should add the part of it actually being two people at the beginning :D Its very nice. :D
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 2.
GRRRRR i love this but you deleted the other parts :( my heart is breaking I really like the way you write, but maybe before you start on chapter two ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 1.
Oh my don't stop its perfect except for a few mistakes here let me see. She add half to her self I think you need to clarify this i took ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Cloud Dreams
oh god your words are wrenching my insides. how in the world did you manage to get under my skin. Please don't stop, your a brain box sir!!! :D could ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Unhappy almost 15 (part 1)
hey pencil girl :D I really liked the first entry of your diary, its very much like reading from a book. But i will admit i got a little lost ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter One: Zephyr
You know what you should get this published. I love the beginning, the way you talk about the thunder (maybe you should have described the beauty of it a little ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Country by the Sea
whoa that is one hell of a story. Its awesome, your really talented mashallah, you should consider writing for a career i have to remind myself that its not a ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Shock of the Rose Killer (Prologue and Chapter 1)
Wow that was nice!!! i have a friend whom i want to join, she wrote a short story on a murder its very similar... well the beginning.(riddle) except in hers ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 5-8)
Its a nice story and im sure that if you complete it and send it to an editor you will be able to make your dream come true. You could ...
Nov 27, 2011