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Re: I Am Insane
Aww that is one lovely poem!! you really wrote this when you were 13 only??? I love the ending part the most, it has such a soft way to it, ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 4
wow and the mystery becomes even MORE mysterious.. Okae sorry about this but a little bit of errors luv. She will do anything for money, whatever the costs I think ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 3
HAHAHAHAHA oh Tuck i love your stunningly beautiful fiery red dress.... NYC (: oh and just so you know that was predictable love, hahaha round two for me. Oh and ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: The Dream
Hi GoaGreena!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!! its such an amazing piece of work, seriously i love the way you talk about dreams and you mix Alice in Wonderland in here and ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 2
hmmm, iv already told you that i like it........ here we go Tuckz I like it :D though i have a feeling im going to like the next chapter better........ ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Dream House
Wow, i never knew that, this is something so different and unique. I really like this, its so new and fresh!!! I really love the way you describe everything about ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Never Say Neverland Ever Again- Chapter 2
Hello Again Noelle okay so i came back as promised. Like Adriana mentioned you used the word window a little too much at the top, but otherwise it was good. ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: deleted
YAY i love this!!!!! its amazing and i want more!!!!! write quickly. I have nothing to say against what you just wrote, and its torture waiting for more!!! Oh dear ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Garage Girl - chapter un
Wow you should really keep this as a novel, i mean i dont really know where its leading up to but i really like it so far. You have a ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Long Story Short
Aw i really loved the ending, it made me smile :D The repetition gets a little too much, but other than that i really liked it. And your poem really ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Four
wow i have read all of the parts so far, your actually quiet good, apart from your grammar mistakes here and there i think its a very nice story. I ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
Oh my God!!!!!! its beautiful really i loved it so much. I loved the ending part. I love the way you work from the top at such a calm peaceful ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1
Heya Tuckz :D Okay i cant believe your doing this but its awesome all the same. you make me proud. While strolling around the museum Jacque had started up a ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Wait 'til Time Sparks
AWWWWWWWWWWW that was the most heart-felt and adorable poem i have ever read... so far :D I loved every single piece of it, seriously amazing. :D SEE you should have ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: A Night in My Town
Hello :D Wow that is a veryyyy long poem (: Its nice in the way that you described what was passing by you, but really (no hard feelings please) i ...
Dec 11, 2011