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huda0509

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Color Khaki

    I know it never is, but when one has a debater soul in oneself, one just cant resist you know...and that's the problem with me :) :P

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Color Khaki

    Thanks for the review, it was helpful. I just want to clarify that if a bunch of Talibans attack your international airport and hijack the plane with more than 100 ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Color Khaki

    The very first line is an author's note. I'm new here so I was unaware of the A.N thingie. And for your second point, I must say that you should ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Color Khaki

    Thanks! that was encouraging. Actually the color of Pakistan's military uniform is khaki so that's why I emphasized it. Thanks for the review! I'll try to write more good next ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Cottage

    thanks for clarifying :) nice story buddy!

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: how it happened.

    Sure it helped. I'll be careful next time. :)

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Literature Re: The Fabulous Fear of Fear

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    nicely written and totally worth reading. That is such a nice and literally A grade story from a 14 year old to write. The vocabulary is good and there are ...

    Jun 12, 2014


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