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  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Writer-Part 2: The Display

    Hey, Huda here. I'm pleased because I'm the first one to review. Yayyyy!!!! The story is very good and I liked it a lot. I must say, that the topic ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Cottage

    Hey, Huda here to review! Firstly, I would appreciate your vivid descriptions and how they enhance the beauty of your story. They actually seem to increase the intensity of your ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flying High

    Hey, Huda here. I've read your story and it totally amazed me. The descriptions are wonderful and the way you've used them in your story is just totally awesome. This ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Last Night on Earth

    Hey, Huda here. First of all, the title of your story is very actually triggers something in mind and the reader automatically opens your story as I just now did. ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: Journals of a Macrocologist

    This is totally great and beautifully written. The words used are really good and they enhance the beauty of this piece of writing. I must say that this is really ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Casual Appearances

    Hey, Huda here for a review. Although its a very short piece of work, but it totally speaks of your writing skills and your strong grasp on words. In just ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Older Sister, Younger Sister

    Hey, Huda here. This story just totally amazed me.The starting is inviting and you words totally engulf the reader in the story. There is a tinge of sadness as your ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: My son

    hey! Huda here, for a review :) The story you've written is nice and the events are described in a good way. There are some punctuation errors like you've written ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Literature Re: The Fabulous Fear of Fear

    nicely written and totally worth reading. That is such a nice and literally A grade story from a 14 year old to write. The vocabulary is good and there are ...

    Jun 12, 2014


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