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Thank you, PaperMoon :D That sentence really doesn't flow well, does it ? I want to create that teenage environment in the story, and not all serious. Maybe I'll rephrase ...

Please comment on this edited version of the prologue. Thanks :D

Thanks for all the reviews ! Dreamwalker - I really appreciate your critique, and you did lots of corrections, too. I'll start working on it right away ! :wink: Windy ...