hopeispeace

I don't believe in concrete rhyme schemes. . . they take away from the poem its self. :)

Bravo! Great poem, and i know who he is *winkyface.

Wow. This is so good. It's incredable. A little confusing, but really, very captivating . . . Is there a sequal?

I was going to correct a few errors, but it seems I've been beet to it. That's alright. Less work for me! This is sort of funny in a strange ...

This flows less like poetry and more like prose...Which is ok! It's still pretty good. ~Hopeispeace

My opinion is pretty much the same as the last review. Work on flow . . . seperate into stanzas . . .overall nice :)

Thanks for your comment! First off I'd like to say, thanks for all the green :) Second, I believe I have a thing or two to explain. . . You ...

Thank you kindly for your comment :) . In a nerdy way I feel it important to tell you you are my very first commentor! Congrats! Anyway, Im glad to ...

" Painting a toenail" I believe personally your poem would be much better without this line. Its a bit unnessesary and up untill it, (and after it) the poem flows ...

I really like this poem. Its expressive metaphorically and honestly thats how I feel poetry should be. Bravo!!