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i liked it but it does need some work :wink:. people die at hospitals all the time, why would he freak? maybe you could say something about the hospital making ...

I liked this a lot! it was very creepy! But there are a few things that you might want to change like in the second sentence you say He looked ...

i liked it, but you NEED more description, what did the possum taste like? was it warm or cold, soft or chewy? was it hard to eat around the bones ...