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This is great start to a story. I like the idea's present so far and can't wait to read about what happens next to him. It is kind of obvious ...

WOW! That was really great and kind of sentimental. I love how the identity's are a secret which leaves us to guess and the way you used winter and spring ...

This is actually pretty good. It dose need some serious work but it's a really good idea. I think that you shouldn't write it off because it's an early piece. ...

Ok so I'm new to this review thing but I hope it helps. I love the imagery. You can clearly make out the scene. I think for improvement maybe you ...