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..Nice!..Wonderful!..I love it..You deserves a round of applause..[claps and people screaming and flowers and you smiling and bowing].. ..I agreed with them..math isn't that bad..it's amazing, really.

..They're right..Your poem is so transparent that you could see its soul just by reading it..It's so emotional and a bit cheesy, very typical for people walking in the boulevard ...

..they're right.."I'm not good at poetry" or something like that is very inappropriate to place before a good poem..Your poem,like what they've said, is so sweet and natural..But your poem ...

I live in this world, Of confusion and doubt, Where labels mean everything, And I am labeled out. I’m breathing, I’m breathing, Though I’m not quite sure why. I’m not ...

..Hi there winjuri!.. ...uhmmm...okay..i do understand the repetitions..of course, because its a ballad..Your poem reminds me of a ballad entitled Lord Randal.. Lord Randal "O where ha you been, Lord ...