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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sometimes There Are Grey Areas

    Effective use of very few words. The tone and message are clear and interesting. You really get the feeling behind it. I agree that a bit of background might be ...

    Oct 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Two Of Us

    Wow, this is fantastic, Jaz! I like that you keep the situation between the two in suspense but still use some foreshadowing. Your details are tight! Normally, when I read ...

    Oct 13, 2010


'Tis the season to shovel enormous amounts of watermelon into your mouth while hunched over the cutting board like a dehydrated vampire that hasn't fed on blood in four hundred years and the only viable substitute is this questionable Christmas-colored fruit.
— Ari11