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Re: My friend Wacky.
Good your friend Wacky sounds like a cool person :) I feel like I already know her just by reading this :) which is good. YOu are a good writer. ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:29 pm -
Re: Hello Again, Christmas.
Hello, This poem is fantastic! The way that you can get so much meaning out of everyday winter things is incredible. You are a very talented writer! I think this ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:23 pm -
Re: Draw Near To Me
Preface Sometimes you just know when your in love. Its hard to explain how you know. Its impossible to put into words. Thats how it is for me. My name ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:22 pm -
Re: Fire
I agree with the other people who reviewed this poem. You should widen your vocabulary, its too simple. More detail as well it was really short and that took away ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:12 pm -
Re: Golden Wings -Chapter 7, Part 2
Our coach called us up to the bench to explain the game plan. We were to keep our force in the defensive, since they had a strong offensive. I would ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 9:06 pm -
Re: Le Charmante Roux: A Moral Tragedy
Heres advice from one writer to another. 1. do NOT let other people get the work for what you put your time into 2. You will not get a lot ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 8:51 pm -
Re: Tattoo Your Name Across My Heart
This may be kind of difficult to read because this is an expert of a post, from an RP that I was once having. It isn't my best work, but ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 8:20 pm -
Re: Breaking Point (Ch. 1)
Please be aware that this is just the very first chapter of something a little person, and something that is most definitely in the works. January had been synonymous for ...
Sun Dec 26, 2010 8:11 pm -
Re: 3 months, 21 days, 7 hours
I’ve been listening to the songs on the disc you gave me in August. The one I ran over with my car. The one that made you leave and never ...
Sat Dec 25, 2010 11:40 pm -
Re: I Hate Christmas Parties
Rated for language and sexual suggestiveness. I Hate Christmas Parties I grimaced at the ugly sight of the wreck which stood before my eyes. Festive bows laid all over the ...
Sat Dec 25, 2010 9:16 pm -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter One
One Introductions “Come one on Zoey what are you waiting for, were we're going to be late to the movies, and I don’t want to get a bad seat.” Zoey ...
Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:04 pm -
Re: Golden Wings- Chaper 7 Part1
I opened my locker, grabbed my basket ball uniform, my shoes and my bag and locked it up again. Tonight would be the most important game of the season; we ...
Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:48 am -
Re: Don't Ask.
I'm not sure if this counts as romantic or not, but that seemed to be the category it fit in best... I think it has a slightly goofy tone at ...
Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:57 pm -
Re: Je t'aime
"Je t’aime," she said, the French words slurring slightly as she spoke. "I love you to Aimèe, I won’t let them get away with this," Steve declaired comma? strongly. He ...
Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:43 pm -
Re: Christmas with the Cullens part 4
I spend as much as possible of the next few days close to Jasper comma who soothes me with his mood control powers. I do not speak much, for I ...
Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:27 pm
