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First of all, well done - I was starting to wonder whether any questions that had remained unanswered in the first two chapters would be cleared up, and I got ...

Hey it's Highwordman here, Overall quite an interesting piece - nowhere near conventional writing, but still familiar enough to make the reader feel comfortable, while intrigued and interested. The pi

An entertainingly funny and rather random poem. The original and quirky title grabbed my attention immediately. My only question is how the wet fish ties in with the rest of ...

A very interesting piece, with an intriguing premise. Some minor grammatical errors here and there did detract from the flow of it, but otherwise, great work. My only criticism is ...

hey palip :) a very intense read, crackling with tension and extremely vivid, lucid and immersing. Although it could have been clearer at times I suppose it will all be ...

an intriguing piece, with stellar atmosphere at the beginning (pun intended), capturing everything vividly and making the story seem as important as the descriptions- a rare feat. I would encourage ...

I would have liked to see a bit more length- you could have introduced other topics and some humour to give it more definition. Otherwise, the rhythm and rhyme are ...