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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Time Passes

    Love love loveeeee the first part describing the car - i've never thought about it like driving a car but it fits so well. so many great metaphors and analogies ...

    May 7, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Urn (W.I.P.)

    gorgeous word library without sounding like you took everything from a thesaurus - i like how the story fluctuates like the narrator is just speaking to someone without making it ...

    May 7, 2024


Uh, Lisa, the whole reason we have elected officials is so we don't have to think all the time. Just like that rainforest scare a few years back: our officials saw there was a problem and they fixed it, didn't they?
— Homer Simpson