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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Flirtatious Glances, Secret Desires (Excerpt)

    Nope, it's still a work-in-progress!

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Flirtatious Glances, Secret Desires (Excerpt)

    I started writing this story up to the point of where they were sitting in detention. I'd gotten to where I would want to continue writing but I didn't know ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Flirtatious Glances, Secret Desires (Excerpt)

    Thank you! I appreciate the feedback! Wow I feel like I searched for grammar errors a hundred times before I submitted. That shows you what a second pair of eyes ...

    Jun 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Block

    Wow, I really appreciate the review! It makes me all tingly inside for me to know that you've read my work and like it! Thank you so much!

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Block

    Thank you so much!

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Block

    Thank you so much! This means a lot to me. I'm glad you took a moment to read my work, I really appreciate it!

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Fatherless Daughter

    Thank you for the review! With all due respect I think you've misinterpreted the meaning behind the piece. It's not the fact that he was a bad father, it's the ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lay Me Down

    Wow, this is actually pretty impressive. The lines flow so well, and I'm loving the imagery I'm getting from this. You are very good at what you do. I would ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: With His Hand In Mine...

    Thank you so much! I'm still working on it as we speak, I will definitely update it soon!

    May 15, 2014


“Sorry about the blood in your mouth. I wish it was mine. I couldn't get the boy to kill me, but I wore his jacket for the longest time.”
— Richard Siken