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Hey! I love the simplicity, and found it very relatable. I wish it rhymed here and there, or maybe an alliteration or two. Other than that I enjoyed it. Love ...

Hey! Thanks to everyone! This is my first song so I was a little worried about the feedback, but you all have been very helpful. :) Black Wind: Thank you ...

Thank you so much, you both really helped. I understand completely, and now realize that I have to spell check even more before I enter, haha. Thanks again.

This is the kind of poetry I like. Not real rhymy, (if that's a word) but hardcore. I loved the how it was told in Adolf's eyes. I could really ...