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Re: we are not/we are
I liked this. I will be honest though, i felt like the first stanza was so powerful, and almost wasted by the rest of the poem. That is not to ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: Chardonnay
Hello there. First off, i really enjoyed the style of this poem. It was fresh, slightly psychotic, and incredibly interesting. I'm not sure if the protagonist is suppose to be ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there
This was a very vivid and powerful poem. The thing that stuck out the most for me was how well you transitioned between thoughts. You take a line like "crow's ...
Jul 16, 2013 -
Re: Timba and James
This story was very well written. Your description is incredible vivid and powerful. It really brings the story and the characters to life. The description also allows you to make ...
Jul 14, 2013
