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  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are not/we are

    I liked this. I will be honest though, i felt like the first stanza was so powerful, and almost wasted by the rest of the poem. That is not to ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Other Re: Chardonnay

    Hello there. First off, i really enjoyed the style of this poem. It was fresh, slightly psychotic, and incredibly interesting. I'm not sure if the protagonist is suppose to be ...

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: your skin gets thinner the longer it's there

    This was a very vivid and powerful poem. The thing that stuck out the most for me was how well you transitioned between thoughts. You take a line like "crow's ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Timba and James

    This story was very well written. Your description is incredible vivid and powerful. It really brings the story and the characters to life. The description also allows you to make ...

    Jul 14, 2013


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead