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Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demon Hunter- The Beginning
Pretty good. I also think spacing the dialouge would do you good. It seemed a little theatrical, like the first five minutes of a tv pilot. Not a bad one, ...
Oct 15, 2008

You may deem me romantic, my dear sister, but I bitterly feel the want of a friend.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein