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It was good, just remember to change youre upper and lower cases on letters. Personally I usually don't care about the length of a poem, but this one could almost ...

Good job, i like how the rythem at the begining is a little off, but gets smoother latter it adds to the character of the poem, even if you didn't ...

Wow, another amazing poem. This is so realistic and kind of scary. the scketchy rythem addds to the feelings and thoughts of the character. Be careful of you're capitalization, i ...

Eather here or lyric poetry, not shure. This was a nice poem, short and simple, and straight to the point ( in it's own way). Just change the letters from ...

Great lyrics, I agree it's very catchy. I love the meaning of the song, really inspiring. usually when I read songs or poems I would post my favorite parts, but ...

So, this is where it really starts to get interesting. One thing I would change is the strange way this line is worded: Good job I’m not a regular smoker. ...

Beautiful poem. this is something all young girls should read. No body should be anything else but themselves. Forever Threnody already pointed out all of your spelling errors. And i ...

The fact that it's all over the place is explained in the next chapter. Sorry if it's confusing.

I like this because it shows us the personality of your main character.otherwise anything I would have mentioned has already been written above, so I won't bore you by repeating ...

I like the story idea this has started, it's a whole nother point of view I do,'t think anyone has written yet.