Young Writers Society

Aw, this almost made me cry and trust me, I don't cry often, so the fact that my eyes misted over was a big thing! :) This poem is beautiful ...

Wow, this is really good! Didn't see any immediate spelling/grammar errors, so well done! I think the repetition you've used it really interesting - it gives it a rythmn that ...

OMG. What a cliffhanger to leave it on!!!! when I first started reading, I was like...ok, eccentric scientist, skeptical peasants, what could happen? I can't wait to see if you ...

First of all, I love the idea! It’s such an enigma and it’s really quite chilling, with the limping stranger and the cruel, mind-boggling game! I can’t wait to read ...

This is such a beautiful story! :) I especially like this bit, The surface of the water broke like paper, but the waves hit her like slabs of concrete. but ...

Wow, wasn't too sure about the beginning, but the end couple of paragraphs really hooked me. I liked the names - they're interesting and different and the way you've explained ...