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  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Gone

    Hey! Imagination here for a review! Overall, this is great. The emotions really are what gives this song life. There are just two things/lines that I think could use a ...

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: a quick reminder we all die and everything is pointless in the end.

    Well then. I'm sorry, but I don't really understand the second half of your piece. My head is kind of muddled at the moment and I'm not really thinking clearly. ...

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Test

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    Says the parrot: Testy, testy, testy. Says the parrot: Testy, testy, testy.Says the parrot: Testy, testy, testy.Says the parrot: Testy, testy, testy.Says the parrot: Testy, testy, testy.Says the parro

    Nov 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deciding to Die

    This, for some reason, reminds me of Norse culture. Valkyries would take the best of fallen warriors and have them become the army of their afterlife. I guess if you ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Winter, Spring and Summer

    Wow. Emotion is like a wave. I'm sure everyone has felt this way before you're not alone. You feel cold in the winter, and blazing hot in the summer. You ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight

    The emotion really shines through in this piece. It's scary. I've thought this way before, but not for myself. I thought this way for other people. Okay, maybe I've thought ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dwarves of Pompeii

    Wow. This was VERY creative. The name was very intriguing. I loved how the story started with the dwarves fleeing from the eruption, instead of it starting with it being ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Unauthorized Autobiography of Me

    I want to start off saying that I have never read The Unauthorized Biography of Me, so your format was confusing. It probably would've made more sense to me if ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Into the Depths

    Haywire here! I'm going to be nit picky for the first time ever. Okay. Here goes. I like the story. I found a few grammar mistakes here. -Wooo[!/,] we[']re here! ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Drug Called Dreaming

    Do you feel this way at all? I do. Too often. The emotion was conveyed in this story very nicely. Great job! But I have one question. You said in ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Wolf Arena

    I would think that this might be part of a story in the works. If you wrote a story with these characters, then the story might not be so emotionless. ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: -=The Sorting Hat=-

    This is a quiz-website worthy quiz right here. I got Ravenclaw! :) I get that on every house test, (naturally, i'm a nerd). Thank you for sharing this, I have ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Cliff Jumping in Maui

    Hya! Imagination here with some positive remarks! Please, please, please tell me this is true. Please! I love this story. You can't make this stuff up. You got lost for ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dreamer's Lament

    THIS IS AMAZING! If you don't mind, I copy and pasted this into my inspiration page. :) This is just.... I am at a loss for words. You probably think ...

    Nov 18, 2014


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