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Re: Gone
Hey! Imagination here for a review! Overall, this is great. The emotions really are what gives this song life. There are just two things/lines that I think could use a ...
Nov 15, 2015 -
Re: a quick reminder we all die and everything is pointless in the end.
Well then. I'm sorry, but I don't really understand the second half of your piece. My head is kind of muddled at the moment and I'm not really thinking clearly. ...
Nov 15, 2015 -
Re: Test
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Nov 11, 2015
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Re: Deciding to Die
This, for some reason, reminds me of Norse culture. Valkyries would take the best of fallen warriors and have them become the army of their afterlife. I guess if you ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Winter, Spring and Summer
Wow. Emotion is like a wave. I'm sure everyone has felt this way before you're not alone. You feel cold in the winter, and blazing hot in the summer. You ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight
The emotion really shines through in this piece. It's scary. I've thought this way before, but not for myself. I thought this way for other people. Okay, maybe I've thought ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Dwarves of Pompeii
Wow. This was VERY creative. The name was very intriguing. I loved how the story started with the dwarves fleeing from the eruption, instead of it starting with it being ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: The Unauthorized Autobiography of Me
I want to start off saying that I have never read The Unauthorized Biography of Me, so your format was confusing. It probably would've made more sense to me if ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Into the Depths
Haywire here! I'm going to be nit picky for the first time ever. Okay. Here goes. I like the story. I found a few grammar mistakes here. -Wooo[!/,] we[']re here! ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: The Drug Called Dreaming
Do you feel this way at all? I do. Too often. The emotion was conveyed in this story very nicely. Great job! But I have one question. You said in ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Wolf Arena
I would think that this might be part of a story in the works. If you wrote a story with these characters, then the story might not be so emotionless. ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: -=The Sorting Hat=-
This is a quiz-website worthy quiz right here. I got Ravenclaw! :) I get that on every house test, (naturally, i'm a nerd). Thank you for sharing this, I have ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Cliff Jumping in Maui
Hya! Imagination here with some positive remarks! Please, please, please tell me this is true. Please! I love this story. You can't make this stuff up. You got lost for ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Dreamer's Lament
THIS IS AMAZING! If you don't mind, I copy and pasted this into my inspiration page. :) This is just.... I am at a loss for words. You probably think ...
Nov 18, 2014
