harrington

Hi there, I just read this one on a whim because I was browsing. I'll start off by confessing I don't really like vampire stories because I find them all ...

Hi, I just read this over and I thought it was very well written. I don't think I had any major nitpicks. I really liked your use of metaphors and ...

Hi there, So I read it through twice and I really enjoyed the idea of it. I love the way you took a metaphor and extended in such a consistent ...

Hi there, So I'll start off with my first thoughts. I thought it was sweet and I understood your intentions and the message you were trying to give, which is ...

Hi SynSeta, I was going to start of with the misuse of capitalisation, but that's already been covered. The idea of the poem has some good potential, however you may ...

Hello :) I'll just sink my teeth straight into this review - 'From the ashes they say cities rise and people find the best of themselves lurking right beneath their ...

Hello :) The first thing I noticed about this is that is may have had the potential to be a haiku, but then that would be quite difficult trying to ...