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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 4

    thanks for the input, I appreciate it!

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 4

    Thanks for the imput. Full disclosure- I wrote this while somewhat tired so that probably explains the confusing pronoun usage. I'm glad that you like the dragon, I'm having oodles ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 3

    Your assumptions were very close, the next chapter should let you know for sure. Thanks once again for your reviews, I appreciate it!

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 1

    Thanks for the input, I've tried to work on formatting more in my future chapters. I actually have up to chapter 9 written as of now, but I'm waiting for ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 3

    thanks for the review, I'll keep a closer eye on formatting next time!

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review, I'll take formatting into account more next time. As for the word changes, I don't think undulate would've fit well with the way the story is ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review, I'll be sure to tag you when I upload the next chapter!

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review, it means a lot to me! I agree with the first two point you made, I'll pay more attention to the wording and placement next time. ...

    Jun 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Boss vs. Beast

    No problem, message me anytime. I just want to say that trying to change for a friend can help characterizing him as a better person, but if he really is ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review, I'll let you knwo when I post my next chapter!

    May 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. I understand that I did make some grammatical errors here and I'll try to correct them in the future. The only correction ...

    May 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Historical Fiction Re: Novel (first page)

    May 21, 2016


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— Gandalf