hamerkid2

I enjoyed it. The i liked the standerd 1 2,1 2 3 4,3 4 pattern and the way it flowed. They can show your youth, Or tell your old age. ...

it reads as though you just pounded the key board then added a few word. Half of it i couldn't understand because it was misspelled or you were using some ...

I liked it. I like how the character admit's their mistakes (because we all know 99.99 percent of people don't admit theirs'.) I wouldn't change the length at all because ...