hae-won

Hello! I shall begin with gushing on this pulsing piece! Loved it :) The dialogue flows extremely well, and every character seem so raw (down-to-earth). I admire all the subtle ...

O-o okay..well practically everything i was going to edit was already said, so I'm going to skip that part^^ Well I loved that cute little relationship you had going on ...

I really enjoyed it! It's amazing the way you explained everything so thoroughly from your character's viewpoints. you somehow took all the five senses and used them to create a ...

Looooooooooove it!!!!!!! yay u put in a part for the gay dude! hes my favorite! :P lol anyway it was hilarious at just the right parts as usual. I think ...

Like olivia said there are some minor errors, but I don't think it really shows alot so it's your choice if you would like to look over it again.^^ Well ...

It had a nice starting but how come it's so short? my apologies if it was insulting to you. I think you should have continued the story though, for I ...

I really liked it! It had some sort of rythym to it It was like drums beating at every stanza. The portraying the angel was very well done in my ...

i LOVE IT! sorry about the caps^^ lol well it was a wonderful story! Perfectly cute at all the right moments! You really had that flow going on of richard ...

O_________O i want the next chapter....its so good! i love it! i actually like the gay guy part, kinda sweet^^ lol well plz hurry and write it! i cant wait! ...

It was a really clever story! I think you really thought it through. I could never have written something like that. Oh and actually I am a bit partial to ...

It was a great story! I really enjoyed it^^ Especially that part "one of those boys u should just avoid, nothing but trouble" That was really cute! I also think ...