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gymbum21

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The truth behind the smile.

    I agree too many "The"'s but its still good... I like how its normal feelings that almost everyone can relate to too...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Love Gone Forever

    hey thanx for the critques.. and i completely agree like i said it is my friends.. but i never liked it a whole lot i thought the whole idea was ...

    Apr 15, 2008


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