guineapiggirl

Thank you! I think I'm definitely going to do some work on this!

Thannk you :D

Thank you. I'll take a good look at that.

Awww, thanks :D

Thank you!

hee hee, thank you!

Thank you for the great review! I'm off to finish my review of your thing now!

There shouldn't be a full stop after morn because the next line is a continuation of that sentence. :D

Never mind... :D

when i say the negatives are few, i mean that there aren't many. because this really was a very good piece of work.

Awww, thank you :D I've changed the punctuation- I think that's what you meant? They always told us at primary school to put commas at the end of sentences in ...

Why thank you. And actually, I can review this, and I think, if I get desperate, I will. Hee hee hee. Thank you!

She got jilted at the altar. It's based on a true story about this cliff at this place I went on holiday :D

She got jilted at the altar.