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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Pencil Tray

    Ha ha, thanks :D I think a couple of people have brought up about switching to her POV so I'll cut that. They're in Geography and it's a graph to ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Pencil Tray

    Thank you for the really helpful comments! I particularly love your suggestions for the opening paragraph :D I'm glad you could relate to John! He's based on me, as is ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Pencil Tray

    Very long review! Danka scherny schern! The colour and grey things are British English spellings rather than American English spellings. I always wonder whether to change it seeing as this ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breaking Free

    That was a forced sock eating there, methinks!

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: seven sins debate #1

    ENVY! cooooooooooooooooooool... Hmmm. I really like the way you've been doing it in dialogue so far, and I think it would be a shame to change it. And, it would ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: Lust

    Glad to have helped:D Lovely little story :D

    Apr 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Ballad of Smeeglibob

    Thank you for this brilliant review :D But please don't call your child Smeeglibob! Or maybe do... Also, I will expand this someday I think :D

    Apr 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Three Vengeful Dwarves

    Thank you :D And thanks for spamming me with reviews :D I hope you had a good one (Easter)!

    Apr 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 6

    You'd buy my book? YOU'D BUY MY BOOK! :D yay i love you!

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 6

    Thank you! I'll have a look at adding in a bit more description :D

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: De Frog Wizard

    Thank you :D

    Mar 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 7

    Ooops, sorry, submitted this one twice!

    Mar 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Without Destiny: Chapter 3

    HI! This isn't a review. I'm not even going to read the piece. I just wanted to say that this is the 100,000th piece on YWS! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! COngratulations! And isn't ...

    Feb 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 3: Trolls

    Thanks! The thick thing was just a typo and the babbies was sort of meant to be troll talk, but a few people have picked up on that seeming strange ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 3: Trolls

    Thanks!

    Feb 24, 2013


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