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Re: The Pencil Tray
Ha ha, thanks :D I think a couple of people have brought up about switching to her POV so I'll cut that. They're in Geography and it's a graph to ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: The Pencil Tray
Thank you for the really helpful comments! I particularly love your suggestions for the opening paragraph :D I'm glad you could relate to John! He's based on me, as is ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: The Pencil Tray
Very long review! Danka scherny schern! The colour and grey things are British English spellings rather than American English spellings. I always wonder whether to change it seeing as this ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Breaking Free
That was a forced sock eating there, methinks!
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: seven sins debate #1
ENVY! cooooooooooooooooooool... Hmmm. I really like the way you've been doing it in dialogue so far, and I think it would be a shame to change it. And, it would ...
Apr 14, 2013 -
Re: Lust
Glad to have helped:D Lovely little story :D
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad of Smeeglibob
Thank you for this brilliant review :D But please don't call your child Smeeglibob! Or maybe do... Also, I will expand this someday I think :D
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: The Three Vengeful Dwarves
Thank you :D And thanks for spamming me with reviews :D I hope you had a good one (Easter)!
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 6
You'd buy my book? YOU'D BUY MY BOOK! :D yay i love you!
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 6
Thank you! I'll have a look at adding in a bit more description :D
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: De Frog Wizard
Thank you :D
Mar 25, 2013 -
Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 7
Ooops, sorry, submitted this one twice!
Mar 17, 2013 -
Re: Without Destiny: Chapter 3
HI! This isn't a review. I'm not even going to read the piece. I just wanted to say that this is the 100,000th piece on YWS! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! COngratulations! And isn't ...
Feb 25, 2013 -
Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 3: Trolls
Thanks! The thick thing was just a typo and the babbies was sort of meant to be troll talk, but a few people have picked up on that seeming strange ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Gorbak the Gobux Chapter 3: Trolls
Thanks!
Feb 24, 2013
