guineapiggirl

Thank you for all those comments! I hadn't even noticed how the students' comments might seem like they're aimed at Areia. I intended them to be read as shouting at ...

Thanks! I'm so glad you like it :D What was the big "OMG" moment for you when all your ideas about the story changed?

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it! If we meet and learn more about Evangeline in the very next chapter, do you think that would be alright? Or ...

Thanks for all the feedback! You've pointed out some really useful things :D I'll tell you a bit more about my world, and hopefully it'll help answer your questions. Baluchinople ...

I'm glad you like the creepiness! Originally, I was going to be all artistic and just sort of leave it as "the murder fell", and then cut to everyone being ...

Thank you for a review with so much stuff for me to improve! Firstly, very embarrassed about the "of"- I don't know how that happened... The names are placeholders, and ...

Thank you for such a positive review and useful advice! Yup, the names are placeholders that I forgot about before uploading- bit embarrassing! I agree about the crow sounds. Your ...

Thanks for a really great review! I completely forgot I hadn't named them yet... I was just sort of in the flow when I wrote this, and couldn't be bothered ...

I'll let you know if I do buff it out, or if I upload anything else :)

Thanks so much! Thank you! That's really encouraging. They're actually dwarves, in my mind, in a sort of fantasy world, but they're basically Vikings, so yeah :D And I was ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. That's really encouraging. I'll work on that sentence, and I feel like I might expand it into something after the comp. ...

Thank you for the review! I've got a word limit with only another 28 words to go for the comp. I want to enter it into, so I don't think ...

I was kind of going for the symbolism thing, yeah! Well, a movie of it would be very cool... It might be very short though. Or, the compulsive pencil tidying ...

Thank you! I'm from Britain. Where are you from? What grammar things did you spot that were weird? Thank you again!

Thank you! They're in Geography (it's based on a personal experience of mine in Geography :D ) and I know there's a box of colours in my Geography classroom, but ...