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Thanks! :D I'm really glad you like it.

Well, you'll just have to wait and see! :) Thanks very much for the feedback, I appreciate it.

I suppose that's a good point. It just seemed to stick out to me, but it also works the way it is. Just not as well as I feel it ...

... I messed up the quotations but the website won't let me fix it. >.> Sorry about that.

Thank you. :) I've been trying to tone it down a bit, but I'll keep your suggestions in mind. I'll probably start splitting the chapters into sections if they're that ...

I know. D: It was terrible. NATE HOW COULD YOU?!

YAY, A REVIEW! Thanks. :D *edits*

:) Thank you Flem. I sort of left it open for interpretation; if I'd wanted you to know exactly what's going on in the story, I'd have added far more ...

Thanks Jai. :) I want to fix it, but I'm at 999 words now, and can't go any higher... :S

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god... xDDD AWESOME!

Wow. That's a loonnggg review. Worth the wait. Harsh too. Good thing I ask for harsh huh? I'll fix what I can in a little while. Right now I'm really ...

Oh my gosh, this is so sad! But so good as well..... I didn't find anything wrong with it, it's great!

Hey, GPS here as requested. I honestly can't find anything wrong with it. You may want to split up the paragraphs though. I'm not a poem person, so sorry that ...

Best thing eva! Utter brilliance!

*GASP*! Announcements announcements announcements! We sing that at Girl Scout camp! ^_^