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Re: The Experiment - Chap. 9
Wow. Just wow. I absolutely love your descriptions, the way you portray people, how you describe how she felt, and your writing in general. Keep it up! I can't wait ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Rebirth Chapter 4
Dude, this is awesome! Cliffhanger = love it! You described things perfectly. I got really nervous and excited in pretty much everything, especially the big fight. As I think you ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Oblivious Chapter One
Okay, like I promised, I went back and read this chapter, (again, stupid stupid me), and I loved it. You have an interesting writing style, like how you kept stopping ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Oblivious Chapter Two
Hey there, I figured that I'd review this. (as I mentioned earlier, we’re all curious, and we wouldn’t have a reason to live because of it. By the way, the ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Risen Demon {1}
Hi, I figured that I'd review this. The monster, dropped his grip. A clear fluid seeping out of his large cuts. He crouched on the sidewalk with a snarl. His ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 6. Part 1.
Hey! I figured that I'd review you because I feel like it. ;) Why had Alonsa been so angry when she’d come to me? It’d hurt when she’d dug her ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Death's Apprentice Chapter Three: Possibly
Hey! I absolutely LOVE this story. I read all of the chapters and honestly, I can't think of much to say. Except, as many people have already said, the image ...
May 26, 2009
