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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When Things Seem...

    this is good, however the last line doesn't fit in with the others. It is a straight out contradiction while the others are not. I'm not sure if this is ...

    Sep 13, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Titleless

    this is good, but i'm not really sure how far apart is safe and sound, also a refrence to the internet.

    Sep 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Turning The Knives 5

    I really liked this, but I'm not so sure about the last part. I don't think that the police would have killed him, let alone without for sure knowing that ...

    Sep 13, 2009


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