greatwhitespork

This is pretty cool. I like the betrayal at the end. I might just sound like an overly concerned parent here, but honestly, the constant profanity kind of threw me ...

I am very impressed! This is a great start to what could potentially be a high-quality literary work. The beginning drew me in, despite the somewhat cliched "discovery of new ...

I am not what you would call a hardcore gamer myself. It's hard to judge a literary work of this format by just one chapter, but I can say so ...

Though I find this rather random, I enjoy the randomness of it. It gives itself a sort of unique interest. We find out that both characters are holding some sort ...