graveyard_dream

great poem, i can really relate. i like the effect of [i]'[u]Searching, wanting, indulging [/u]in the naiveté of my youth' [/i] the rythmn is like someone is chewing/ taking bites ...

great poem, very descriptive and good imagery. I quite like the use of 'cherry lipstick' in the first stanza, as cherry sounds innocent and sweet, but it is also a ...