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Thanks a ton man! I'm glad you like the narration and also a big thank you for pointing out Dayton's character bump. I'll get on that right away :) Hope ...

Gosh thanks so much! I really appreciate your advice and so sorry it's taken me awhile to get back to you! I'm so glad you liked it and it will ...

Ah I'm so glad! :)

You've officially made the rest of my family think I'm loco. I'm sitting here giggling and snorting like a lunatic. Oh gosh I love it so much. It's funny, it's ...

That's rad! All the way to the end? Phew! Haha looking forward to it!

Love it! Very vivid, I could see it all happening like a movie. And that little truth at the end? That makes it golden. Well done.

Hey thanks a lot for the tips! I'll definitely look into chubbing it out a little :)

Wow thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked it because I wasn't so sure about it myself. You've been a big help man! And I'll be posting the ...

Liked it! Even though it made me cringe too... but sounds good! :)

I'm glad it was helpful and good luck! And yes I would love to read the next chapters! I'll keep an eye out for it :)

I'm glad it was helpful man! Have a great day!

Hey thanks! I appreciate the help! :)

Thanks a lot for the advice Felistia! :) You're very encouraging!

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

Rad! I'm stoked that you like the first person :) I was hoping it wasn't too much, haha! Thank you for the tips!