gothgirl

Thank you. Also it will not be the Edward/Bella kind you will be glad to here. Yes I will try by best to add more description. You will Have to ...

Wow a very powerful poem. I almost cried, it reminded me of the people who don't have their parents with them. The people who are in foster care. I would ...

I like how you did it in the style everyone can understand. You used very good vocabulary. I feel that every little kid would enjoy this. Overall, a really good ...

I like how you set the poem. I feel that you didn't have to think too much, that it just came naturally. You used very good vocabulary, and I can't ...