goodolnoah

Thank you SO MUCH for the review! I%u2019ll never be able to explain to you the amount of gratitude I feel from your continued interest in my little multiverse! Characters ...

AHHH thank you for the in depth review! I created Kara about 5 years ago now and this is her first (and only lol) starring role. I was excited to ...

Thank you! This story is less of a novel and more of a short story so the rising stakes may seem a little fast!

Haha. The universe I wrote this in does have some X-Men inspiration. I really like the interpretation of this as some sort of dystopian western, though! I'm also glad you ...

U are quite the perceptive fellow, Vamp! Sky is a character I originally wrote a story for in 2020. She will be appearing in another story soon-to-be published here, but ...

Ahh okay! That's good to keep in mind. I'll still continue to give you insights as I go along, maybe something can help! I read a bit into chapter 3 ...

Thank you for the review, Raven! I wanted to see what you thought as a consistent reader of my inter-connected stories. I%u2019m still working on a pretty large draft, and ...

The sisters lived in the Desert for 41 years, but their actual ages are 71, with Diana being 68 because she is the younger one between her and Raiya. They ...

AAA thank you for the review! Your new style of reviewing is really great! I appreciat how much more in-depth it goes. Though, your reviews before were still already more ...

Aww thank you! Your comment really helped motivate me more honestly :D I've made it a big goal of mine to make it clear what is happening in a story ...

Thank you for the read! I agree with most of your critiques. I use they to specify the main character, Fi-So's gender because they don't identify as man nor woman. ...

Thank you for the review! I appreciate the compliments about my writing of dialogue and characters :D

Thank you for the review! This was one of my favorite sections to write for due to the new setting and my re-interest in space and existential dread. I feel ...

Thank you for the review! Despite DRU%u2019s sometimes violent efforts, they do want to protect dimensions. Not sure if I explained this well, but if the Radio core explodes, the ...

Thank you for the review! I appreciate the compliments about my world-building and organization. It makes me glad that someone can easily get into my world, even when I feel ...