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Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “I see. Well, the other girls are in the powder room to your left, but you may help yourself to any outfits in the dressing ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary To mirror what Avian said not very long ago, I think I have a new favorite character… I saw on your wall somewhere that you ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The Valencia Desert was a wide-ranged land filled with hot sand and sun. The sky was a pink hue, with dunes layered as far as ...

Hello There! ~ Writing Commentary All the buildings were either demolished or badly destroyed, shattered shards of glass and broken off pieces of concrete were everywhere. The air was colder ...

Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Hello there! I am happy that you liked my previous comment! I would like to give a formal review of your story with my own ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone was standing by the big bloom of red flowers, caressing them with her hand. As she did, more sprouted around it, slowly, with the ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Her heart began to race, faster and faster. The dirt around the tombstone started to rumble; the ground shook with such force that it caused ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary She sighed and leaned back in her chair. She was taking in her surroundings—the smell of freshly made soup rumbled her stomach, and the sound ...

Hello again! Let us get on with the review! Writing Commentary The daughter of Demeter was swift and dodged every single blow that Abderus had for her. Her brown hair ...

Ooo, this is very nice! I've never seen a poem similar to this where Birds and Fish are used in a metaphor relating to love. I think you achieved the ...

Hello again! College has been busy lately, finally, I’ve come upon a moment of reprieve, which I wanted to use to read some more of your story! Writing Commentary “I ...

Hello there! I have returned for another review! Writing Commentary Again, your writing is great! In this chapter, the dialogue really seems to shine. When I read in my head, ...

Hello there! I would like to check out this work using my own method! I hope my review is of some use! I peeked only to see some references to ...

Hello again! The night grows with the first scourge of black, I must review! Writing Commentary This chapter is gripping, as always. There are some especially nice descriptions and character ...

Hello again! Let us continue with the reviews! Commentary I feel like my commentary should be fused together for this review, because this section is quite dialogue heavy. The dialogue ...