gomer4ik

This is a really interesting short story, I like how it turned out in the end, the way it mimics the beginning. I'll avoid nit-picking because I think there is ...

Thank you everybody for your reviews :))) I really appreciate your kind words. You make me write more and more :) At the moment I'm working at one very interesting ...

Amen. God bless you for writing such B-E-A-utiful poem! -------------------- -Jojo. You're welcome :) And thank you for your review :)

I really enjoyed reading that, I've got to ask is that a real story? it really seems like something from real life. It's not a real story... It's totally from ...

This was sincerely beautiful. . . I feel like it could be a magnet on my fridge or a poster or something. I have to say I LIKED how you ...

Amen. good job! Thank you :)

Hello Gomer! You're relatively new. I hope you're enjoying the site! Anyway, on with the review. First off, I think this piece belongs in the 'Other' section. I can see ...

Hi, I viewed your piece here. To be honest, I didn't like it. I liked it a little bit but it still didn't pull me in. The writing is great, ...

This will be interesting to review I think - I'm an atheist so beware :P My Lord, may I be faithful with You now?

I really enjoyed reading this, and loved the content of the poem. There are only two things that just seem to jump out as stange: To your True Love’s kiss. ...

Oh, my, this is wonderful! Very vivid imagery and great diction, and it actually sounds like somebody is talking to God. I’ll be your faithful slave forever, Until I fall ...

Kool! Sorry! I don't know what else to say! I'm really bad at writing reviews! :( Don't worry! Any review makes me happy :)

Hey there! I love the simplicity of your writing and the beauty that comes from just a few chosen words. There are a few spelling errors, but you've got it ...

Hey! I really like this poem. it has a really nice flow to it. I like the sensory to it. Great job. Thank you very very very much)))))

Hi there, I like the cadence of this piece. It flows nicely. Actually, I just like the whole poem. It's tone is serious, yet romantic, and the imagery is sound, ...