ginnyp0tter

Interesting so far! I like it! Here are some nit-picky details. The Words faded away softly "Words" should not be capitilized. Elvina follows Aslan. The sudden jump to present tense ...

loved sisterhood of the traveling pants. the author was fantastic, writing four different storylines at once and linking them all together through four girl's points of view. i'm still rooting ...

Here's my theory: When the Lord of the Rings was written, people had longer attention spans. Today some people don't even have the patience to read a book period much ...

Loved the book, hated the movie. Haven't read Eldest, though, nor have I watched/read Star Wars. (books or movies of both?) Of course, it's rare that I watch a movie ...

nice, write more! I enjoyed the first chapter. I agree, give it a name. And the weasleys are being way too cold about Percy's death. Even if they had a ...

Nice. I like hearing about Tonks and Lupin. I really hope they're in book 7 a lot. A few grammer errors here and there, some sentences that could be shorter ...

i liked the beginning, thought it was interesting. I agree about the stops, though, way too many. Short sentences make a jerky read, like a bus starting and stopping every ...