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The poem Broken Houses by Gravity is a good attempt since it beautifully describes the situation of pain and twists in ones life when there isnt a roof which covers ...

ok aley i will see to it! thanks keep reviewing my other work too..

You jus want me to convert whole into lower case right? And nothing else? Looking forward to your suggestions..ghsnjs for reviewing

sweetu there isnt an extra space after was firstly then further i will have to keep it to bore only so that it rhymes with shore :( thanks anyways!!!

thanks iron for taking out time honey i would want to ask you how should i correct these following stanzas "WRITING ON THE SAND AS I WAS GETTING BORE" I ...

thanks Tay 01 i will make the changes!!!

hope to see you writing more and more...on different topics!!! good luck.

thanks alot! i will be uploading my other work too kindly let me know of any changes!

it was a nice work but too short!!!

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it was a nice work but too short!!!