geheim717

I really like the beginning of this story. I agree with other people who have commented that the first sentence is particularly engaging, which is what the first sentence of ...

I really like this poem, you had me from the first four lines. Also, I don't know if you noticed or if it was intentional but your poem fits many ...

I really like this poem, the emotion of the narrator really comes through and it reads really well as a poem too. My favourite lines were: Everytime we spoke, I ...

I really like this poem. This first verse: In a bed of darkness my mind sleeps. Where evil hidesand trouble creeps. is my favourite. It;s a really strong way to ...

I think this is a really nice poem, I'm guessing a lot of people will be able to relate to it who have been in similar situations before, a lot ...

This is a really amazing poem! First of all I salute you, for being able to use rhyme in your poem so effectively without the poem becoming nonsensical. Also I ...

I really like this poem it has a really great flow and has really strong imagery. Although short, in my opinion its very complete and really puts strong images in ...