geekyamna

Need some harsh critique on this chapter. Please ignore grammer/spelling mistakes since its a first draft! Does it have enough hook, a good MC voice and good pace It seemed ...

Any critique is welcome.The sun lowered in the sky, an array of colours meshed and it was breathtaking. The beaches were most definitely the best thing about La Pare. I ...

Any critique is welcomeWhat do people think about the moment before they die? What thoughts ran through the mind during that second they straddled the thin line between existence and ...