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Thanks Matt. I took note of what you said and changed the period in the first line to a ruptured '--' that wraps up the first line and begins the ...

Thanks Matt. I took note of what you said and changed the period in the first line to a ruptured '--' that wraps up the first line and begins the ...

Just read Clo's review the whole way through and realised she said much the same thing I did about showing not telling. Told you you'd probably heard it before! One ...

I see! You cleared this up extremely well. I did notice Drew Morrison's surname, but I didn't make the connections you did because to me a last name was still ...

Cute. Annoying, but cute.